

Take between 10 and 15
minutes to draw up a grid like the one below. Include brief ideas
about the two poems.
You should make sure
you highlight similarities and
differences so that when you write the essay you are
comparing.
|
Content |
Language |
Structure |
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Both
poems describe people who appear angry |
Both
poems use non standard English & are written phonetically which
emphasizes their culture. |
H.C uses
repetition to convey his annoyance while U.I lacks punctuation
which makes you read it faster, perhaps as though angry. |
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Both poets
describe how they feel unfairly judged. H.C is due to his skin colour
but U.I is because of the way he speaks. |
H.C uses images
of music, art, etc that mix to make things more beautiful whereas
U.I does not use metaphor or imagery to covey his feelings. |
H.C uses
mixture of line & stanza length, the long stanza used to stress his
anger. unlike U.I which has one long stanza, like an autocue
which possibly suggests humour as well as anger. |
As you write your essay
you should be careful to use PEE paragraphs ( or PEACE if you have been
taught this way of extending your writing)

What
is the poem about? Comment on the ideas, themes and most importantly the
feelings in the poems you are writing about.
You will need to know
what each of the poems are about before the exam;
-
Moving to
a new country: Search for my tongue/ Presents from my Aunts/ Hurricane
Hits England
-
Protest/
Anger: Half Caste/ Unrelated Incidents/ Not my Business
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Identity:
This Room/ Love After Love/ Presents from my Aunts/ Search for my Tongue/
Hurricane Hits England
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Conflict:
Presents from my Aunts/ Search for my Tongue/ Not my Business
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Celebration: This Room/ Love After Love/ Hurricane Hits England/ Half
Caste

How is the poem written? Comment on the language
devices used and their effect as well as how they show the poet is feeling.
Pick out quotation which show these language devices in action.
You will
need to make sure you can identify the following language devices;
Alliteration, Colloquialism, Metaphor, Onomatopoeia, Personification,
Simile, Phonetics, Pathetic Fallacy, Sibilance

How
is the poem laid out on the page? You will need to comment on the structural
devices and their effect as well as how they link to how the poet is
feeling. Pick the best quotations you can to show these in action.
You will need to make
sure you understand and can identify these devices before the exam;
Stanza
length, Line length, Enjambment, Punctuation, Repetition.
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